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well ... here is my first doujin ...
my Yuri periode at her best
Shizuru X Natsuki ... Mai hime
hope you enjoy

if their is some mystake (in english) ... please forgive me I'm french :giggle:

[edit :] thanks for your advices => drawing edited

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:icontaylor-the-weird:
aww! It's adorable! I love their expressions! You're English is very good.

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"Hmmm... if by sour cream you mean napalm, then yes, I do have it in the fridge!"
:icontarushiru:
awwwwwwwwwww..... :giggle: that's so sweet!

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:iconburstangel:
thanks :aww:
*glad to know I'm not bad in english ^^*

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:bulletred::bulletgreen::bulletblue::bulletpurple: (\ /)
:bulletred::bulletgreen::bulletblue::bulletpurple: ( . .) In Yuri I belive !
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:icondurathror:
Your art is very good.
As for the dialogue, it's still understandable, but could be worded better, I think..
"To thank you, I first think about a kiss...But you're sick..maybe I'll be too..." could be changed to "I would kiss you, but I might get sick." but then you would have to change the panels..
Also, I believe you meant "joking", not "jocking".
Otherwise, it is very good! :D

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Eh rly?
:iconburstangel:
thanks ^^

*take notes*

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:bulletred::bulletgreen::bulletblue::bulletpurple: (\ /)
:bulletred::bulletgreen::bulletblue::bulletpurple: ( . .) In Yuri I belive !
:bulletred::bulletgreen::bulletblue::bulletpurple: c(")(")
:icondurathror:
You're welcome. :D

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Eh rly?
:icondamadhatter:
Looks really great!

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Ya know the kind thing to do is reply (or check someones page) when they leave you a comment.... :)
:iconsoifong-taichou:
Aww, thats so cute!
Definetly a fave!

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:icongg-sama:
Aww so cute! Hehe, I especially like Shizuru's fantasy...
:iconiriaayukawa:
that was sweet ^^

i love it

fav!

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:star: *The moon shines only because of the sun* :star:
:heart: ~and I´m so in love with my own moon~ :heart:

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August 2, 2006
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